People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?
The actual lifestyle has some drawbacks, for example, we are always running to everywhere or we have few time to spend with our friends and family. However, the cumulative effect of all these thing may become into stress. Whatever the profession we have, we must learn how to release our stress, for example many people use reading as a way of releasing stress other prefer to work in their gardens. However, in my opinion, practicing sports are the best way to deal with stress, due to the fact that exercising could have a wider range of benefit from social, emotional and physical point of view.
Firstly, usually sports have social interaction, and this kind of interaction helps people to relax. Whatever the type of sport people practice, they are involved with other people, whether somebody likes to practice indoor activities or outdoors, they will certainly have social interaction. Moreover, there are a lot of technical information about how talking with other helps to feel more relaxed and happier. For example, I always go to the gym at the end of the day, doing that I feel more peaceful and I can realize how my mood gets better. Other example, is when I go to play soccer, I definitely think that the conversation I have with my friends allows me to release my stress.
Secondly, whatever the exercise we practice, our body become healthier. It is not a secret that working out has many benefits for our body, among others, improves the performance of our lungs, diminish our heart rate, stabilizes our blood pressure, etc. Moreover, when we are practicing any sport, our brain gets more oxygen from our lungs; this makes us cleverer and happier than before the exercise. In addition, I have to mention that sports helps to improve our psychological behavior, because exercising makes feel people more optimistic about their life’s.
To conclude, we all have a bit of stress in our life’s due to the modern lifestyle, which make as wonder about how to deal with it. However, there are many ways to control and overcome our stress, such as reading, watching TV, making the garden or exercising. In my view, practicing sports is the most effective way to manage people’s stress because it helps them to improve their body and mind. In other words, sports make people happier and healthy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...always running to everywhere or we have few time to spend with our friends and family. H...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
.... However, the cumulative effect of all these thing may become into stress. Whatever the pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90101522843 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60559048101 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7751875159 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.588235294 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240109853634 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802128947326 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636296100919 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156662913721 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838362623067 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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