People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.
In today's world, it is generally agreed upon that teem working plays a pivotal role in succeed of many projects. Due to its paramount importance, scholars have tried to find factors which have positive as well as negative impact on achievement of teem working. One of the issues regarding the elements which has profound impact on teem working is whether members of the teem shoud have same opinion or having different point of view about the issues in hand. I subscribe to the belief that having the same opinion puts a limit on members to see the big picture and for the sake of impressive accomplishment, it is necessary to have a teem with people who holding the different point of view.
To begin with, it is both widely and firmly believed that teem working, as the cornerstone of teem's success, must be meticulously taken into account. When members have different opinions, they can discuss about positive and negative aspects of problems and acquire a great deal of knowledge through communicating. Accordingly, thanks to communication they can form a bond with each other which create a sense of community among them.
Secondly, it is crystal clear that selecting members of teem requires a major consideration. Decision makers should choose individual who can fulfill their needs. In fact, life can turn into nirvana for them having members with different skills and abilities who can struggle with new problems. To be specific, when members have differnt opinions, in the time of difficulty, they can see different aspect of problem and try to gain different skills and knowledge in order to tackle that specific part of problem in which he or she believe is the crucial part of it. As a matter of fact, the more various the member's opinion are , the more information team acquire. So, it provides an opportunity for team to surmount the formidable obstacles and pave the way toward achieving the apex of success.
Finally, there are always landmark decisions in the span of any team and in those crucial juncture of time, it is necessary for team to see the big picture. having a team with different opinion which enjoy a great amount of experience will help to evalute all aspect of perplex problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in fact, as a matter of fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6821449094 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529255319149 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3222498857 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.266666667 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184117254982 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577297803848 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512509891546 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106824580898 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330198306839 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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