People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree? with the statement. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
If you be realistic, you will have better life than others who are romantic, the author states that. I think that this opint of view depend to the country that you live there. For example, in my country, being realistic id the basis of the life. Therefore, you can have betteer live than other. All in all, I believe being realistic is better for people who live in my country. I want to reinforce my point of view from the following aspects.
The chief reason why I generaly chose realistic is that you be able to plan all aspect of your life before it happen and you will prepare for it. All the time they think to all aspect of their decitions. they know whats happened around them. what people think about them. Therefore, they can manege all of their relations better than other people. For example, some times I just use my emotion in mu desitions and don’t think logically to all of it’s aspect, I fail. Consequently, I deside I should plan A to Z of my life logically and there is no way for emotions.
Second, people who think logical and realistic will understand their condition and oppurtunities better than other people. Theit decitions are based on the their talent and most of the time aree the better for themselves. For example, people must make their desitions based on their talent and their conditions to be successful on their life. Most of the life situation are different from person to person. Eventhough every one love ideal life conditions, it is cont achiecveable to every one. For example, when I first accepted form the university. I rent a house for my self where there is no bad or don’t have good conditions. However, when I thought realistic I said it’s the best choise for my budget and situation.
Third, realistic people can manage better in the vital situation, not just by their feeling. All the time we occur with memonet that we think it is not legenthy and believe that they want to overlook our rights. I that moment if we can contorol to our emotion and describe our right logicaly we could obtain to our right. On the other hand, If we behaive based on our emotion, we neer be able to achieve to those rights.
All in all, in my opint of view, eventhough most of the people loves to have friend or partner from romantic and emotion people, I chose realistic and logical ones. based on the reasons I mentioned above.
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...le, I chose realistic and logical ones. based on the reasons I mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, third, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60563380282 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47235592248 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457746478873 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5843423902 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206957325274 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619342424056 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561075737236 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121820935046 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062123756659 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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