Nowadays, we live in a competitive world where everyone is striving to get high quality job in order to keep up with the advanced world. So that the issue about specialization or generalization which is better to help people get high quality job is still on debate, but in my opinion, I believe that people who develop one skill are more successful than people who develop different skills. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people who tend to develop one skill are likely to get high salary job because rich companies always incline to specialization and hire experts. Also, we live on internet era where many people can gain superficial knowledge about any field, but it is so hard to have deep knowledge through internet only, especially there are a lot of competitors that they studied several years to gain deep knowledge. For instance, after graduation from pharmacy school, I tended to specialize in pharmaceutics. I took the master degree, and many online courses to gain much knowledge in pharmaceutics subject. All that took me years as I was reading many books, practicing and searching on scholarship papers. Thereby, I ended up working at international company with high salary. However, my friends who after graduation worked in a pharmacy, they are paid low and the same salary for years as there is no promotion or incentive. That’s why; it is so essential for people to specialize to be expertise in their field as well as gain high salary.
Second of all, developing one skill is so crucial in these days because people prefer to go to specialist in all fields like going to the specialist doctor or the electronic engineer to repair any devices, and so on. For instance, when my cell phone was damaged two years ago, I went to my brother, who is a doctor, to repair it because he knew some knowledge about repairing from the internet, but my mobile phone winded up not fixed and got worse than before. Thus, I took it to a mobile technical, and he fixed my mobile in half an hour only. I was astonished of his expertise, I knew after that he is an electronic engineer. Also, the same thing with our health. Most people tend to go to specialist doctor rather than generalized. Therefore, developing one skill is required nowadays in all field, and preferred by most of the people.
To sum up, the issue about generalization or specialization is controversial, but I think that people who develop one skill are more successful than people who develop different skills for two reasons. It is so important to get high salary, and it is preferred by most of the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is preferred by most of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, i think, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74082073434 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81718476533 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477321814255 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0760924995 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.15 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381866646788 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105314481377 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16234463092 0.0737576698707 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29650881631 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136574428883 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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