People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer
Work is very important for everybody because there are a lot of benefits with it. Among the benefits are included money, socialization and health care.
They work because they need to pay bills. For instance, since they live in a house and make usage of eletricity and water, they have to pay these bills. Besides, it is necessary to work in order to pay teenagers' high school and colleges. In addition, money is necessary for health insurance because not in every country is this facility available.
Furthermore, there is a necessity of feeling useful for oneself and also for society. For example, people have to have any sort of work to fulfill their time. It can be working for a community as a volunteer. Otherwise they may end up getting some maladies.
Besides, having a job enables them to socialize with others. As an example, they can combine things to do after work. It may be enjoy bars, parties, or even meet new people. They can even travel abroad with their collegue or boss. Therefore, their friends' field increases in a very high percentage at work.
Finally, work is the best tool for people to make money, to fulfill the empty spaces and to be known by others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...working for a community as a volunteer. Otherwise they may end up getting some maladies. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ases in a very high percentage at work. Finally, work is the best tool for peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69711538462 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49496071254 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0112719703 48.9658058833 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.0625 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233431882026 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789708213032 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602736901493 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129904768351 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391119255646 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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