Social media and the internet have bad effects on people as they make communications poor. Do you agree or disagree?
The internet and social media have destroyed people's life since they started existing. In my opinion, using them is a wasted time.
Firstly, in the past people used to have a better life than they are having currently. In the 40's or even 50's the only way of communication was by calling the friend in person, or better saying going to his/her house and speaking with him. At least it has worked to me. I remember that if I wanted to invite a friend to do any sort of activity, I had to go to his house.
Moreover, what it is happening recently is the fact that social media and the internet are eradicating our lives. We are spending more time with social media than family members. There are some situations when we are in a bar with friends and instead of talking to them we would rather use whatsapp to speak with them. Therefore, it is a very disgusting situation.
However, they are a faster way to communicate. When we are living abroad there is no better to speak with our family and friends than using those ones.
Finally, as it is said "time is money" we should try to save money and have a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
... with our family and friends than using those ones. Finally, as it is said 'time is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, at least, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42307692308 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45657552573 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.65188872 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177472275432 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670065058787 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880003871682 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101201326691 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074608685096 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 12.6369458128 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 11.5310837438 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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