Social media and the Internet have bad effects on people as they make communications poor. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples.
Recently, the phenomenon of negative effects of the Internet and social media has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that Internet has some beneficiary effects in many cases, such issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial numbers of people. I strongly believe that although the Internet brings many advantages, exceeding usage of virtual spaces on the Internet can lead to poorer human communication, and this essay will look at both sides by providing some evidence before the conclusion.
From a social standpoint, spending too much time on social applications and avoiding personal communication by people has some destructive effects to the society, which are rooted in the fact that social networks and the lack of education are extremely bound up. From my experience when I was in college and participated in a survey, the results revealed that side effects of social networking on teenage groups far outweigh its merits. Thus, parental control as well as offer some restricted rules for using social networks could be a solution to this issue.
Within the realm of advanced technology, some opponents tend to believe that bad behaviors and side effects of social communication are unavoidable impacts of it. They support their idea through some academic research conducted by a prestigious institute about many positive aspects of media and technological communication. Moreover, opponents claim that using the Internet and social media not only could decrease the side effects of air pollution but also have many benefits for improving creativity and widen the outlooks of youngsters to the world.
To sum up, I pen down saying that although some people think social media could be a positive phenomenon, I strongly tend to believe that without supervision from parents and proper awareness on social media it could be destructive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36789297659 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9037959573 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3249441132 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.5 104.977214359 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229034088797 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975147517042 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504195355619 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138987861481 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303284332506 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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