People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer.

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People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work?

Discuss one or more of these reasons, use specific examples and details to support your answer.

Some people argue that if you want to live, you need money for that. So, to earn money, you have to work as slave of industries. However, people do not work for money, because if they do, they will find themselves running into catch the money. I believe that, people do not work for money it’s other way round. I will discuss the two main reasons in the following essay.
First of all, people have passion for their dream, like to achieve some goal, some status in the society, so people work for that reason. In addition to that, person wants to make his or her family to inspire for better growth of his or her children, so he or she can be idol example of his or her child’s role model. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, My elder brother. He is working in a multinational company as the facility manager. He had mundane life, and lacked of social life, causes him to live only for money. Every day, he used to get tired of his exhausting work. And anyhow, he used to read books, he learned about the working style, and how to make life gregarious. As a result of this, he became more creative in his work, and got rid of his quotidian life. So, he shaped his life in garrulous and gregarious manner. One valuable thing taught by him to me, ‘Do not run for money, let money walk with you’, this sentence plays a vital role to analyse myself at this point.
Secondly, if people will start work for money, then we will not have such an advancement of computer. People work because they have career goals to achieve, to make best of it. People work for their interest, their self-satisfaction. They have already developed the love for their work, so there is no money involved in with his or her job. For example, consider Elon Musk, is he working for money? The correct answer is no, he is not. He has taxing schedule of work. Moreover, handling four companies, at the same time, is not easy work to do. But we can see, he is doing great. What motivates him? The passion, goals, to improve the society, to help see the world from different angle. That drives him everyday to get in his shoes, and work. So, people do not work for money to live, but it is passion, goals, likings, that drive them to do work.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that, people do not work for money to live, unless they are penurious. This is because of people have passion for their work, to do whole heartily and make better life for society and for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...e had mundane, and lack of social life. Everyday, he used to get tired of his exhausting...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d from different angle. That drives him everyday to get on his shoes, and work. So, peop...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44419642857 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31114545098 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0291984644 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2258064516 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4516129032 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67741935484 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317333838313 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964532700198 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703851470459 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223866943698 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640844987187 0.0645574589148 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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