I agree with the prompt. I think an important decision need an important discussion with the important persons.
Some people argue that a person can take/make an important discussion individually without the concern of other peoples.They might have the feeling of self-righteous since its their life and they can do whatever they like without affecting the other people. However. i disagree with that concept as i feel that important decision should never be made alone. I will support my view point in two paragraphs.
Firstly, no matter how well matured you feel of yourself in taking decision, you will be lacking some important key while taking the decision alone.The self decided plan will never be a successful one although it seems to be successful in one way. For example, my brother was planning for a trip with his friends and before going, he asked for the permission and had some discussion with all the family members about the trip like how is the route, how much is the budget , whats the main purpose of the trip etc. After discussion, father allowed him to join the trip. Had he not discussed about the trip with the family members, who would have financed him when was short of money? who would have helped him if he was in any trouble. The trip would be successful but there could be any uncertainties. Who would have helped him deal with him. At least, he can assure that my family are there to help him whenever he is in trouble. So, the result are far too different when you decide it on your own and on the discussion.
Secondly, an important decision holds an important purpose for every person. They have to think it on the long term basis. For example, let us talk about marrying a person. Marrying someone is not a joke. A person has to spend rest of his/her life with him/her. And what if they decide to get married because of some instant affection without having a real talk and referring to their elders or without consent of their parents? This is gonna make their life miserable. They might be happy for some moments but later they will soon realize the consequences of their decision.
In conclusion, whether to have or not have an important discussion on the topic is a complex issue. People are having a better outcomes when they are not having a important discussion whereas not a better result even after having a better decision with others. However, i think it is better to have important discussion with the related person so that you would be benefited in either way
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly without the concern of other peoples.They might have the feeling of self-righteou...
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...ave the feeling of self-righteous since its their life and they can do whatever the...
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...ike without affecting the other people. However. i disagree with that concept as i feel...
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...ut affecting the other people. However. i disagree with that concept as i feel th...
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...ut affecting the other people. However. i disagree with that concept as i feel th...
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...rm basis. For example, let us talk about marrying a person. Marrying someone is n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, as to, at least, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70135746606 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51952108278 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475113122172 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.5708276164 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.12 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.68 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250649975492 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730436228933 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116962076177 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182544604602 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930503380267 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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