A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town city?
If someone who I know him want to migrate my city for living, I am definitely sure he would enjoy living here and like this city. This essay will support this idea by providing three reasons as follow.
First of all, being historical is one of the most significant features of nice city. Rasht is an ancient city where people live here since 800 A.C and there are a lot of old castles and bridges. Since Rasht is in north of Iran it has a humidity weather, there are some big and famous parks built in Rasht and people know it as a Green City.
Furthermore, having several mineral sources and big factories help to Rasht’s economy. Jakart which is the most important gold miner of Iran located in east of city. In addition there is a big industry complex in the south of city where prepared many job opportunities for men and women. However it have some demerits such as noise and air pollution, traffic, and make city crowded, in dead it rise people’s welfare and convenient. According to the researches which published by Iran economic institution (IEI), Rasht has just 0.02 unemployment rate and it has the first rank in welfare rate between all city of Iran.
Finally, traditions and costumes of Rasht are so popular and well known. Citizens of Rasht are so friendly, easy going, hard-working and kind. Every year in last week of summer people travel to Rasht and participate in government celebration and have fun here and create their best memories. For instance, two years ago I met my girlfriend in that party and we fall in love. That is my best memory of entire life and we want to get marry next month.
In conclusion, I believe if someone decided to move to my city, he /she will like this city and it will be interesting for him. I suppose three major reasons to support it which were includes natural sight, economic situation and traditions ritually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64564564565 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56143658008 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5436502276 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108748742448 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033111708401 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441801885474 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710519102082 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542794073315 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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