pets should be considered as family member . agree or not
I completely agree that pets should be treated like family member. We consider animal in a category of pets when we welcome them in our home and I believe everyone who is living in house has equal status, so lucidly explains that treating pets differently does not make sense. I think in such a way for several reasons, which I will explore in below paragraphs.
To begin with, We mostly bring pets in their early age, so from very starting they consider us a family and their guardian. So, now it becomes our responsibility to take good care of them. This situation is same like when we welcome new born baby in our family, we take proper care, we feed them, play with them and the whole reason of doing so is we are attached to our baby. I think same bond we share with pet, when they first time come to family, every thing is new for them, they need a same care as baby needs. The most important reason for doing so is, pets have the emotion and we should respect their emotion, never leave them alone, always give them the love. Sometime people finds difficulty in adjusting but once get attached, that relation takes a marvelous turn. For example, When my grandfather was young, he was fond of dogs, but my grandmother was scared of them. So, one day he brought the dog as a surprise, and that time they fought because she was not happy with the decision. After few days pass the mind blowing scene I saw my grandmother was feeding and taking care of the dog. This basically happens in every family because its the fact we get attached to the person who lives with us and then it does not matter who he, she is, so this time it was dog. So, her care for dog developed by heart.
Another reason I believe they should be treated like family member is, they are innocent one, they lack speech, but they share different language. We see in lot of movies and also in real life that animals behave according to their mood, when they were happy, they play, lick the members of family and when they gets upset they simply set in a corner and do nothing. So this is how animals expresses their love language. In this growing world , I heard in many families their younger ones leave the house to thrive in life and to experience something new. I feel that time many people adopt pet to spend time with them, in fact this help alone person a lot. Like they spend whole time in care and their walk , this way people never feel alone. For example, when I was planning to shift to the USA, my parents really felt so sad and they have fear that they get alone because I am the only child, So I gifted them a cat, because I love cat a lot. Now, they easily manage things, give time to cat, play with that , make dresses for her, even they celebrated her birthday. In such way my parents get a new chapter in their life and she literally became new member of family.
To put all in nutshell, Pets have the same emotions as humans have and like we don't hurt human, likewise we should not to same with animals. When they live with us, they should be pampered equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, really, so, then, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 103.0 43.0788530466 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2515.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 574.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38153310105 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12057082962 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473867595819 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.0 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8359867311 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.96 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177868634346 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643981922186 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123061696692 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161725812512 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107653523775 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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