Plants can provide food, clothing, shelter or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country?
Upon the question what is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country, different people have different opinions based on their cultures, nationalities, etc. From my point of view, there are various plants in Iran and each one has its unique importance. But I would like to choose rice and in the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, our main food consists of meat and rice. We eat rice for lunch and dinner because it has essential nutrients such as minerals, fatty acids, proteins and so forth. According to the latest researches which were published in well-known journals, rice has all essential amino acids. So that people who consume it regularly, are less prone to physical and mental disorders like cancer, depression, anxiety, etc.
In the second place, cultivation of rice has countless positive effects on our economy. A lot of youth work in rice farms and they can obtain money from this farms. I think the production of rice will reduce the rate of unemployment significantly. Furthermore, the export of rice to foreign countries has increased dramatically and based on the recent statistics, it will exceed the export of oil in 2020.
Last but not least, the root of rice plant has medicinal properties. Currently, researchers extract numerous components from root and stem of the rice, pure them and use them for making pills and capsules. These pills will be consumed by the patients who suffer from headaches or other ailments.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that rice is the most important plant to the people in my country. In my opinion, it is the healthiest food and can provide my country with a lot of job opportunities or other advantages which I outlined above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to rice'
Suggestion: to rice
... importance. But I would like to choose rice and in the following paragraphs, I will...
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Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s like cancer, depression, anxiety, etc. In the second place, cultivation of rice...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ce farms and they can obtain money from this farms. I think the production of rice w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92508143322 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80265856146 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599348534202 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7906583799 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212155481445 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612058939348 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862913229273 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115819969023 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102714083471 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.