Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
plants has different uses for people all arund the world. some plants are a vital part of food, such as, potato, tomato, etc. while, there are special kind of trees to construct a building. In my country people used to cut tree to make hand-made material for their daily use but, bringing the tea plant to this region by an English merchant changed everthing. Nowadays, drinking tea is an important culture in my society. In the following essay, I will bring some reasons to support my opinion about importance of tea.
First and foremost, when farmers wants to make more money by cultivating there is no hesitation for them that tea is the best chioce. Consequently, In my homeland the number of farmers who has an inclination to produce and sell tea is increasing every year. To illustrate this big change in job of the farmers, I'll use an example of my own life. my aunt is a great tea producer, he satrted his business 5 years ago and gaind much more money that he expected. However, last year the government decided to restrict the number of tea farms around the town. Thus, my aunt lost his job and now he feel depressed because the ban in cultivating tea which was a great work for he and his mates.
Secondly, most of the people drink tea usually and it makes them feel pleseare and relax. In other words, it has become a common culture between all individuals. For instance, I can't imagine a single day of my life without a cup a tea. Hence, 6 mounths ago, when I was working for the military service, lack of tea to drink made me mad and stressful. Needless to say, it could be a model of addiction which is not a suitable manner, but, it reveals the role that tea plant play in my life.
To sum up, tea is not only one kind of plant for our people but also it shows the way of living to us. it is because of it's importance to the people who searching for a job and because of the vital role it has in drinking liquids in this part of the global.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., tomato, etc. while, there are special kind of trees to construct a building. In my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33423913043 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40170047469 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540760869565 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2674076363 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9473684211 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117630376244 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437459142436 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517552964925 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907070389001 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742073925342 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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