Plants have different uses for people all around the world. Some plants are a vital part of food, such as, potato, tomato, etc. while, there are special kinds of trees to construct a building. In my country people used to cut trees to make hand-made materials for their daily use. However, bringing tea plant to this region by an English merchant changed everthing overtime. Nowadays, drinking tea is an important culture in my society. In the following essay, I will bring some reasons to support my opinion about importance of tea.
First and foremost, when Farmers wants to make more money by cultivating, there is no hesitation for them that tea is the best choice. Consequently, In my homeland the number of farmers who has an inclination for production and selling tea is increasing every year. Due o illustrate this big change in job of farmers, I'll use an example of my own life. My aunt is a great tea producer, he started his business 5 years ago and gaind much more money that he expected at first step. However, last year the government decided to restrict the number of tea farms around the town. Thus, my aunt lost his job and now he feel depressed because of the ban in cultivating tea, which was a convenient thing to do for he and his mates.
Secondly, most of the people drink tea usually and it makes them feel calm and relax. In other words, it has become a common culture between all individuals. For instance, I can't imagine a single day of my life without a cup a tea. Hence, 6 mounths ago, when I was working out of the city, lack of tea to drink made me mad and stressful. Needless to say, it could be a model of addiction which is not a suitable manner. But, it reveals the role that tea plant plays in my life.
To sum up, tea is not only a kind of plant for our people but also, it enlight the brain of us. It is because of it's importance to the people who searches for a job and because of the vital role it has in drinking liquids in this part of the global.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37096774194 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43811721198 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5232927849 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4285714286 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117375126892 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422300433434 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452619319003 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087965231334 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695419527375 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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