Print media, including magazines and newspapers, will be soon be completely replaced by internet news sources.
Technology is developing with an amazingly fast pace, and it is touching every aspect of our lives, from smart phones to smart homes. This expansion in the tech world is making everything accessible and significantly easy to manage, as an example it is affecting any type of paper-based media by covering every news and story they write, electronically and posting them on the Internet platform.
There are number of reasons why I believe this replacement will happen, first, since everybody owns a smart phone these days, more than 75% of Americans were using cellphones in 2018, and they do pretty much all their tasks with their phones, such as checking emails, paying their bills, etc. Before, all these tasks were mostly paper based or required the individual to go to the bank, however, technology and the invention of smart devices completely changed these processes. For this reason, if someone is interested in reading the news on certain times or have access to different stories with various subjects they can easily reach out to their phones and look those up, while if they are dependent on paper-based media, they need to wait until they get their news paper and magazine and sometime, they are not even covering the subjects they are looking for.
My second reason is that using technology for these purposes, such as reading the news with your laptop instead of reading it from a paper, will help with the environment. Although some may say the feeling you get from holding your news paper or touching your magazine is priceless, we must know that so many trees get chopped off for creation of papers and the lesser number of trees means lesser amount of oxygen for us and for our future generation, also it impacts global warming negatively. We are all responsible for saving the environment.
Lastly, I believe paper based media will be replaced by internet source news, because internet is faster, accessible and offer variety of sources for different subjects and also since we are going toward saving the earth for the next generation, people will easily give up on papers and all the “Sensations” they wanted to experience just to keep the trees alive and help the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 766, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... they need to wait until they get their news paper and magazine and sometime, they are not...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...y the feeling you get from holding your news paper or touching your magazine is priceless,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92204301075 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54809642868 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.563218123 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.444444444 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.6045352989 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148133187564 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572873282509 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660644021045 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101115927091 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758707341019 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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