Prompt: do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Some people think that the internet and modern technology affects mostly negative in today’s world although others think it affects mostly positive. From my experience, I contemplate that modern technologies have changed today’s life a lot in a positive way.
For example, I’m a university student and because of the corona pandemic, I can’t continue my studies face to face anymore, unfortunately. But thanks to the internet my professor and me and other students could keep on our studies online and it’s very useful. If there weren’t modern connections like the internet, we won’t continue our studies.
Another example I’m supposed to deliver my bachelor project and thesis just at the end of the semester. For this purpose, I need to read a lot of materials such as articles, papers, and reference books, but it’s very time-consuming whenever I try to search them in the university’s library. Now I have the ability to search them online and read all of them from reliable resources, moreover, I don’t need to go to university. Using online and reliable resources help people a lot.
Finally, as an international student, I’m not able to travel several times to my country to see my family but with applications like SKYPE, I can keep in touch with my family just with an internet connection. I talk to them and see them face to face and I don’t get homesick anymore. Formerly students and their family had to write a mail and it took a lot of time to reach each other and they couldn’t see or talk to each other. So with the internet, everybody could be kept in touch with their family from all over the world.
For the aforementioned reasons, I consider modern technologies have affected our lives so much.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Grades encourage students to learn Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 88
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- TPO 20 80
- Prompt do you agree or disagree with the following statement Overall the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today s world Use reasons and details to support your opinion 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ologies have changed today’s life a lot in a positive way. For example, I’m a university student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90540540541 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83029080114 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3588082566 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104100337781 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372777319031 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437750026339 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532346484774 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497135914894 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.