Prompt do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet

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Prompt: do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
“It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet”.

Submitted by aminarman on Thu, 11/19/2020 - 16:34

It’s critically important for students to use the best available resources when they want to do research. Some of the students prefer to use online resources from the internet while the others prefer to use printed materials and papers. In my experience, I disagree with the prompt and I’d prefer using the internet for my researches because it’s fast, environment friendly, and it’s easy to carry the data.
To begin with, the internet is fast and handy. I can use the internet whenever and wherever I am. For example, because of corona pandemic other students and I have to be away from each other and from university too. I used to do my research at university but now that I’m away from university, I have not stopped doing research and I just keep up my research with the internet. There are so many reliable resources such as Elsevier, Springer that I can buy the articles I want and read them. So using the internet is easy and handy
Secondly, whenever I use the internet I use less paper. It’s so much better for our environment to consume less paper and with these little steps we could save our planet. For example, I can remember when the university was open, I bought all of the articles from university or bookstores. I read the articles and when I was done with them, I just threw them in trash because they became useless after reading. So by using the internet we can help to save our planet
Finally, printed materials such as books and articles are heavy. It’s really difficult to put them to backpack and move them from point A to point B; but with using the internet, I am able to download all of the books and papers and store them on my tablet. A tablet is much lighter than so many books. The internet makes things lighter.
As I have illustrated, doing research by internet is far useful than printed materials.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...esources when they want to do research. Some of the students prefer to use online resources...
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...ndly, and it’s easy to carry the data. To begin with, the internet is fast and ...
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...nternet we can help to save our planet Finally, printed materials such as books...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61027190332 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49629840695 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474320241692 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3737663701 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396838355732 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136780679884 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100166524287 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255540562001 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733071648606 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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