Providing internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
In the preceding years, due to the development of technology, the level of people’s living condition has been improved in different aspects. Also, Governments have been allocating funds to make progress in the level of communication among people. For instance many people across the country have access to the internet. The question which arises here is that whether it is beneficial that governments provide internet for all citizens at no cost. From my view point, I believe that internet should be provided freely for people. There are some reasons to illustrate this, two of which will be elucidated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, for providing equitable condition for those who cannot afford the expense of internet, the government should offer internet without any cost. Nowadays many people struggling with different financial problems cannot afford to have an expensive internet for their children, so the children cannot utilize from internet advantages and they will be left behind from promoting their knowledge, however if the government offer free internet to all citizen, many family’s problems will be solved and they will feel confident that their children can use internet as other children. For instance, due to the pandemic disease spreading to many countries, many students should proceed their learning remotely by internet.so government has offered free internet for all people in order to made the situation much easier especially for students who cannot have access to internet.
Moreover, providing free internet can guarantee the economic growth in local businesses which in long run can pave the way for the society reach the point of prosperity. internet is very important to those traveling to different countries because they want to be up to dated with information and they also want to use internet to find their destination on the map but most of the time because of roaming, internet costs fortune for them, however offering free internet can be beneficial for these tourists and local people as well because tourists can get information that is needed for their trip. And due to tourist attraction, many more people will be eager to travel which can improve the local business.
In conclusion, if the government offer free internet to all citizen, everyone can benefit from it. Because for those family who cannot afford to provide internet for their children, free internet can reduce their problems and worries over their children improvement. Also, this offer can be good for both tourists who need information for their trip and local people whose business will be progressed because of the arrival of more tourists to their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27842227378 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65313402597 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475638051044 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.130757006 48.9658058833 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7333333333 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310123456451 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128070066302 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947146003967 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214890904203 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643996862291 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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