Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our world is changing so quickly. One Important question is whether these constant changes have made people happy or not. Personally speaking, I believe that today, people have more reasons to be happy than they had in the past time. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint with the aid of some reasons and examples.
The first important reason is that people can try new things beacuse constant change of the world provides new amzing things for them to experience. For example, few years ago, people didn't know any thing about satelite internet or traveling to space achievable for everyone. In this regard, In such an unstable world, there will always be new amazing things to experience. This will make people hopeful to continue their lives to see new things. This is also an strong motivation for people to increase their knowledge of new emergings that can change their lives in a positive way and ultimately will make them happy.
The other important reason is that in such a world that changes so quickly, they can learn new things so they can solve their problems more cleverly. Personally speaking, no one can reject this idea that contemporary people are more educated than people of the past times. Today, Due to the undeniable advances in human knowledgeand the explosion of information, childeren are aware of facts thah were seemingly unsolvable mystries to scientist in the past. In such a situation, people know the basic governing rules of the workd, so they can easily find proper solutions to their problems. In this regard, contemporary people, won't have unsolvable problems in their lives which ultimately make them less woried about their future. This will provide them a calm and happy life.
On the other hand, such an ever changing world can make people so sad. Although people have many opportunities in this world and they can achieve many triump, but they are temporary and they will be outdated soon. In such a situation, people won't have any time to be proud of their succusses. They should always be in work to learn new things because their knowledge will be outdated soon. They should always work an thry to learn new things because there will be more and more new thecnologies that will make old ones completely useless.
In conclusion, based on the reasons mentioned above, I believe that today, people are more happy and less worried as they were in the past. On the other hand, contemporary people have more tasks to do that can put an pressure on them.
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...ople have more tasks to do that can put an pressure on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86247086247 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4731132819 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438228438228 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6871591228 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239229438624 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886251361814 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464011936929 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166466261202 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511782820815 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.