QUESTION
imagine that your city government has given premission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighbourhood. do you think this is a good idea/.why or why not?explain yout position using specific reason and answer.
Building a factory in the residential area is not a good idea and it do not have any positive affect.The approval of making a big factory in between the houses should not be given legally by the government to a company either it is major or minor. In the following essay I intend to put forth my reasons to support my view.
First, factories usually have a lot of waste, it does not matter what kind of factory is it. The harmful chemicals in the discard can seriousky affect the health of locals of that area. For instance, I know numerous factory where the waste required to be keep at the open space. When i got a chance to visit the industry there are different chemicals used in the production of parts of car, it contains carbon, tar,aluminium and other dangerous elements. These substances lead to diseases that are not cureable. Thus, this instance elucidates that government should never give authority to anyone because the health of the public is most essential
Secondly,in all industry as there are number of large machines which makes loud noises. They are the major cause of noise pollution that affects the elderly, and heart people living near by it. For example, my grandfather is 80 years old he gets anxiety attacks if there is any high volume. Therfore, the example illustrates that in noisy neighbourhood the life of old people is at risk.
Third, instead of factory this land can be given to those who makes park or something that helps to increase the rate of living of public. It is the responsibity of government to take care of his country.
In my opinion, this is really a bad idea beacuse after the whole day of hard working everyone wants peace or rest not the sounds of drum on their heads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62214983713 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5523287632 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4452506995 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17968770673 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469506572206 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049888240692 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882837394639 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529774202463 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.