Since ancient times, many parents have wanted their children to read many books. Some parents especially force their children to read non fiction books as they believe fiction is not good for children. However, I strongly disagree. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
First, fiction books foster children’s imagination. Fiction books deal mostly with things that are not possible in real life. Therefore, children naturally imagine while reading fiction books and as it repeats, after the scope of imagination widens. This is of great help to the children later, such as study, understanding people’s minds and overcoming the difficulties of reality. For example, I have a friend who has watched a lot of fiction books and movies since she was young. Thanks to these books and movies she has a great imagination, so she sympathizes with people's feelings and has many friends.
Second, fiction books make us interested in books. These days smartphones, computers and television are so advanced that it is harder for children to read books. The reason is that books are not as interesting as videos. If children who think like this are forced to read non fiction books, they will probably not want to read books more. Therefore, children should be interested in books with their favorite fiction books. In fact, my father who likes books also said that he liked books through comic books.
Last, fiction books can be precious memories. Non-fiction books contain only realistic content, so leaving no strong impression. On the other hand, fiction books contain stories and remain in memory for a long time. Thus, these books become memories of each one later. In particular, you can laugh and reminisce about the past with your friends and build a consensus.
This is why I disagree that fiction books are not helpful for children. Fiction books foster children’s imagination, interest in books and remain as memories. In any field, it would be a problem if you stick to one book too much, but the fiction book itself is really meaningful and great!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in fact, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06104651163 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58628641758 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531976744186 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5503337075 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5416666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493562247146 0.236089414692 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164968337854 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135411235517 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32317283085 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983323131098 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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