Reducing living expenses for your friend: 1. Find a roommate 2.do not buy technological devices 3.cooking and cheaper food
It is goes without saying that money is the most important part of our lives. There has been a controversial debate as to what the most effective factor in reducing expenditures is. From my perspective, having a roommate, who lives with you in the same house, is a sure way to decrease the amount of money spending in life, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are presented as follows.
To begin with, sharing a room with someone else, my friend is able to save money. It is not a secret to anyone that avoiding spending money for huge expenses such as rent is so beneficial since the rent of a house usually creates a large portion of expenditures in addition to we are required to pay it every month. Having a roommate, who can afford paying half of the money, my friend will be able to reduce the amount of financial pressure that is on her shoulders. To put it in more vivid picture, my brother studying abroad, had difficulty earn the living two years ago, I recommended him to share a room with another student affording living there in order to accumulate money for his future in addition to reducing his monetary challenges; he is now going to buy a new car by his own budget. Had my brother not taken my advice, he would not have such a comfortable life. As you can see, cutting huge expenses is more helpful for getting rid of financial problems and saving more money for the future.
Furthermore, the presence of a person as a roommate will helps my friend to cope with difficult monetary situations. It is crystal clear that humans as intellectual creatures are interested in communicating with other people, so consulting with roommates who are living with us is an effective way to overcome different obstacles since they are more likely to help us in tough circumstances by lending money or getting advice for reducing our expenses. Living with other people, we enable to know their characteristics, personalities, habits, and their line of though well which means that we can guide them better than anyone else; as a result, knowing roommate's life style is a great way to aid them find a way to manage their money by lending money or showing them the most cost-effective way to fulfill their financial obligations.
In sum, not only will my friend be able to save more money, she will also find alternatives to meet her needs by lending money or consulting with her roommate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
...onth. Having a roommate, who can afford paying half of the money, my friend will be ab...
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Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...e a room with another student affording living there in order to accumulate money for ...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...presence of a person as a roommate will helps my friend to cope with difficult moneta...
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Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roommates'' or 'roommate's'?
Suggestion: roommates'; roommate's
... than anyone else; as a result, knowing roommates life style is a great way to aid them f...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... money or consulting with her roommate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66273584906 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74945280002 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514150943396 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.967914666 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.076923077 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6153846154 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136650270446 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515858240941 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305934452424 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786221797983 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357816565667 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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