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The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.

In today's world, the government's rules are the paramount issue in each society. Based on researchers' founding, the number of crimes that had occurred by the youngest people is increased over the past decades. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether following and obeying the rules which are strict, by young people is agreeable or it is dissatisfactory and has a negative impact on society. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more pleaser whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more possible. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted. It has negative and positive impacts on young people. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reason.
The first reason coming to ming to elucidate my standpoint is following the rules is important for each society and it ensures to prevent the crime and moreover decreases the possibilities and chance of occurring crime. Some of these rules have been created to prevent young people willing to join the band which made the theme to do obnoxious and callous to other people. Consider my personal experience to make this point clear. When I was a teenager I made friends with the wrong people that had an addiction to smoke and alcohol. I do not smoke never time but I enjoyed spending my time with them because it made me to felt power. But one night the police stop their car and they went to court for their addiction. I was so scared and never again join to that band.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that these rules are fruitful if young people can understand what reasons behind them. The government should explain why these rules are set and why should teenagers follow them. If they understand the reasons behind the theme they can accept those easily.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, the rules that young people should follow are not strict if they can find why those rules are set.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'smoke'.
Suggestion: never smoke
...ddiction to smoke and alcohol. I do not smoke never time but I enjoyed spending my time wit...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t and why should teenagers follow them. If they understand the reasons behind the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, whereas, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88603988604 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61377651373 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535612535613 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3941438755 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290085883321 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762986131718 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841244799658 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185848901266 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732966405985 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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