The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. do you agree?
In this modern era, controlling society is hard for the government, so the government must add a strict rule to people. While some people believe that in the past, adult people follow the rules less than now, I firmly disagree. I think this way for two crucial reasons. I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, in today's sophisticated world, youths have a critical act in boosting society, so by forcing adult-people to obey the rule, the community could considerably be developed. In other words, the government should guide adult people's behavior in the right way and use their ability to improve welfare of every one exists in society. Such rules are not a firm law, but there are make with moral and cultural values to help youths. Many studies have shown that when one society could develop, teens of society respect the rules and improve government.
Secondly, young people act and behave differently in this vital age, so today's society needs to make a firm rule for adults. In the other words, adult people are immature yet. Maybe they want to do some dangerous activity and try to experience sports that jeopardize their life, so this rules bring safe and healthy body for them. To clarify more, the majority of young people assume that restrict them from driving until age 18 is one of the strict rules, whereas these kinds of laws keep them safe from colliding with cars. For instance, my country ten years ago revised the law. In this new law, if a person reaches to ten years old, one can drive. one month later, the rate of accident, mortality, and misbehavior increased drastically.
Therefore, we understand that rules were made for the security of people.
To sum up, I believe that nowadays strict rules to follow are essential for youth for two essential reasons. First of all, because they have indispensable role in society so by advising them to obey rules, we can have developed society. Secondly, since
As for this writer's advice, I urge youth to respect the law without doing so; we will have an underdeveloped country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...aches to ten years old, one can drive. one month later, the rate of accident, mort...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
... society. Secondly, since As for this writers advice, I urge youth to respect the law...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, as for, for instance, i think, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89014084507 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53083503356 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569014084507 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7506480245 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3684210526 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241012157779 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713971625535 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561103030386 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118079530186 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568924687352 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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