saving money or traveling?
saving money or traveling?
Nobody can deny the importance of money in human life nowadays. Although many people prefer to spend their entire income for traveling to see some new place, I prefer to save money for a couple of reasons. In the following passage I clarify why my opinion is opposite.
First and most profound reason for this claim is that, it shows that persons responsibilities. if we save money in initiate years of our working, in future life we will have a clear and relaxed mind, even we lose our job for any possible events. however, I personally love to traveling, but saving money is most significant to ensure our future life. So our deposited money will support us of being unemployment.
Also, based on fact, human life is full of unpredictable events which we can solve them by money. for example if we confront with some bad car crash and we need to some operation, consequently we will need extra money to protect our hospital expensive costs.
Additionally, people always have opportunities to travel, but the time for saving money is better to be done when they are young to protect their married life too. because when they decide to get marriage, not only they are responsible for support their own life, but also they are responsible for their children as well.
Last but not least I wish to say that, if we are rich people, and we do not need to save money and we have adequate income, it is essential for us to spend our money in traveling to see new places to be familiar with several people and several cultures. The more money, the more happiness.
As a conclusion, it is essential for everybody to save some money to have relaxed mind in future, because we are responsible to protect our future life and our children too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Saving
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t our future life and our children too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64856230032 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61286776421 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514376996805 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0138502533 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357278340261 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186359094574 0.076458572812 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235337918831 0.0737576698707 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305384428372 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2912103226 0.0645574589148 451% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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