Several languages die each year Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Several languages die each year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.

We live in a world where things keep on changing and even diminishing each year and language is one of them. No one can deny the fact that language is a fundamental factor for any nation to their identity. In the given scenario, some people perceive the extinction of language as their good fortune as it makes people all over the world easy to communicate however some other opine that this will have negative impact on our state. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly, if only fewer language exist then communication becomes feasible ensuing harmonious ambience to some extent. Having said that, . to make this happen disappearing language should not be taken as first resort. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, in this competitive world people have to communicate with working personnel globally be it in person or virtually . During this course, the only hurdle people face is language barrier. To be more precise, if there are merely a fewer language all around then it would be great for working person as they can easily share their ideas and concept to anyone from the world. In addition, this will surely ameliorates relationship within them. To cite an example, if a person from Japan have to coordinate with the person from Africa and let us assume they are not aware of each other ‘s language then what would happen? Indeed, they cannot work collectively in real. Therefore, it surely benefits people if fewer language is in existence.
The above stated statements sound reasonable however the identity of nation that language accord should not be overlooked. Even though, language extinction offer a great deal to working personnel, one should not forget that it is the language that makes us unique and grants our identity even in foreign land. Drawing from my own experience, last year I visited Singapore with family and when we had conversation in our mother tongue people around us got curious about what were we talking about and where were we from? This was the moment we felt so proud that we got a chance to represent our home land. Therefore, this clearly shows that how language plays a vital role in delineating our identity.
All things considered, language is something that should be reamain still and pass from generation to generation. Despite the fact that having fewer language might be beneficial in some ways, it is not always welcoming.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93253012048 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60970555051 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525301204819 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3125664583 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4761904762 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294088035727 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935866631044 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574556209594 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179057711588 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739718822123 0.0645574589148 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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