should art and music be compulsory subjects?
Life is a combinations of struggles, unsuccessful and few cherish moment. There are many things which makes life misunderstanding and tiresome, but there are only few practices to make life blissful. Arts and music helps people to forget the most of the painful situations of life. As far as i m concerned, arts and musics should be the part of the compulsory subjects.
At my first blush, art is a part of our life. Art is a way of expressing our inner emotion. There are many arts which are praised and respected in our worlds. Arts are of various kinds, such as paintings, films, dances and musics. All these things provide cheers to life. For supporting instance, painting are of great importance in all generations. It represents feelings of a person through its color, pictures and way of presenting. Art helps to release the stress, thereby compensating the balance in life. Therefore, art is very important in every prospective.
Admittedly, musics are also a part of arts, which provides pleasing sensation to mind and body. In many cases, Music are represents as a therapy used in many fields to cure different kinds of health issues. It increases the enthusiasm in person by giving courage to do work more effectively. For examples, many persons are seen with mobile phone or mp3 in theirs hand while doing physical work. It is beneficial for children as well to listen music in order to refresh mind and concentrate in study. Hence, musics helps in uplifting concentrations, thereby helping to reduce stress.
In fact, musics and arts are both essential for sustaining healthy life of a person. Arts and musics assist in enriching the concentration in doing complex work in math and physics. For example, students will be tried working all day in solving problems of math and science. So, it will be good time for them to invent few minutes in arts and musics in order to obtain attentions in more complex subjects. However, math and science are the most important subjects as they will help in buildings basics for future.
In conclusions, arts and musics are compulsory subjects as they adds fun, refreshment and increase enthusiasm in students. Thus, arts are musics should be given more emphasis in today's world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a combination' or simply 'combinations'?
Suggestion: a combination; combinations
Life is a combinations of struggles, unsuccessful and few cher...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
... musics are compulsory subjects as they adds fun, refreshment and increase enthusias...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94429708223 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79036267775 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527851458886 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.542389064 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6923076923 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390084858347 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104692845014 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122445848538 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247009905143 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149493639752 0.0645574589148 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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