Should high school students wear uniforms?
The question that whether high school students wear a uniform is the controversial topic and there are different opinion on this topic. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that students should wear uniforms while others have a negative attitude. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on arguments for supporting my views.
The first advantage of wearing a uniform in school is that it helps students to concentrate only on their academic curriculum. When students dress up the same cloth, they do not distract by what clothes her/his classmate are wearing. If there is not the rule for wearing the uniform and everyone can wear her favorite cloth, it would create a chaotic situation in school. Students compete with each other on a different brand of clothes, different style, and model. As result, they get away from the main purpose in school. But with same cloth this kind of distraction eliminate and the student could totally concentrate on their study.
Another advantage of wearing a uniform is that this way assist student’s parents to save money. Without the uniform, students will tend to wear the latest model in bazar, teenagers usually do not think about whether their parent affords to buy everything they want, as a result, they pressure their parents to buy their favorite clothes that sometimes are very expensive. Parent love their children and obey their wants although they have not enough money. But wearing a uniform in high school gives them an opportunity to save their money and invest in necessary things.
Last but not least, the rule of wearing uniform prepare students to disciplining their behavior. They learn, they must follow the rule even it would be contrary to their wishes. From this little strict law, they learn laws always help them to live in society without conflicting with each other.
By the way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I of the opinion that students require to wear uniforms to concentrate on their academic goals and also it helps their parent save money that they should spend on many clothes that buy by a student if there is not a law of uniform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wearing
... I of the opinion that students require to wear uniforms to concentrate on their academ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, kind of, as a result, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96164383562 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51142482356 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498630136986 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8630030137 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414113030103 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153098548525 0.076458572812 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127253905805 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26057315349 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100416454665 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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