In many country, students have to wear uniform when they go to schools. In Korea, Students who enter middle schools start to wear school uniforms for the fist time. These day, as students' rights become stronger, people who oppose the idea that students should wear school uniforms have begun to emerge. On this issue, I don’t think students need to wear school uniform. There are quite a few inconveniences that I felt while wearing school uniform for 5 years in Korea. There are the reasons that I disagree with the issue ‘Should students wear uniform?’.
Firstly, students have the right to wear what they want. They have the right to freely choose what they want to wear. This 'choice' can be a good experience in making a more desirable choice later in society. And, teenagers have a strong desire to decorate themselves as they grow up.
Next, school uniforms are uneconomical. In Korea, students have to buy school uniforms before they enter. But they have to pay at least 200 dollars to buy school uniforms. Teenagers grow up at a rapid pace. Therefore, school uniforms become unsuitable for the body, and every time they grow up, they have to pay a lot of money to buy them.
Lastly, school uniforms are uncomfortable. School uniforms should be comfortable because students have to wear them all day long while studying. But when you try it on, it doesn't stretch easily and it's hard to move. So many students don’t want to wear school uniforms.
For these reasons, I disagree with the opinion that students should wear school uniforms. I think it would be best for students to wear clothes that are most comfortable, fit and look good for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
...wear school uniforms for the fist time. These day, as students rights become stronger, pe...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...le studying. But when you try it on, it doesnt stretch easily and its hard to move. So...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, while, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81533101045 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47216901986 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505226480836 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5143335146 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.8095238095 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.57985776895 0.236089414692 246% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21500975406 0.076458572812 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135384143635 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335818097566 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177463212416 0.0645574589148 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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