Should we save land for endangered animals?
Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that civilization should save land for endangered animals. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree with this statement because, obviously, those endangered animals providing a better life for people and the ecosystem. Therefore, it is kind of interesting to find out the reason behind.
One primary reason is that everything in our planet has the connection with each other, for instance, if insects become endangered: our trees, plants, and flowers will be damaged because those little factors are keeping the plants healthy. Moreover, one thing that I am sure of is that endangered animals have a serious affection for their environment. As I read before, Russian scientist Zulmov said those endangered animals are the main keystone to our environment.
Another important reason is that if we once start to save land for endangered animals there is an opportunity to build a whole system for endangered animals. Therefore, if we enhance our defending land of endangered animals we can save our animals for thousands of years. For example, we have already brought back one piece of the endangered animal named black tail and thanks to that discovery we have much more hope and opportunity to bring our animals back. That is the proof that if once we start we can change things into the bright side.
Apart from the points I made above, there is also one reason why we should save land for endangered animals is we can make scientific proofs and experiments on the animals. As I said in the third paragraph if we once have a chance to look deeply at those endangered animals we can make an experiment and know more about our historical events. Those endangered animals have genuine, bone structures overlap.
Last but not least, I wish to say this period which is full of innovations and technological advances we have to keep focusing on our historical pieces. Especially, endangered animals are the most sensitive and crucial topic for today people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... One primary reason is that everything in our planet has the connection with ea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99705014749 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74046219604 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1356404008 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.575595563282 0.236089414692 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208496167341 0.076458572812 273% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16518691845 0.0737576698707 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330052791853 0.150856017488 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150286220795 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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