Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that leadership comes naturally. But others have an attitude that it depends on human effort. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement because nobody has become successful without patience, labor and effort.
One primary reason is that everyone who exists on this earth was born equal. Nobody had over leadership power than others from their natural. Every young baby who was born just five seconds ago is now crying simultaneously. Every average infant has walked when they turn two years old. Every toddler can play, dance and sing. Did we see someone who led a group of people and made a change in their kindergarten? The answer is no, hence there is no chance to be born with leadership ability.
Another important reason is that in the 21st century we all know that every our dreams come true as long as we devote ourselves and put an effort. Besides, everyone able to learn to be a leader as well. For example, my brother who had a problem with talking with people became a great leader!! He used to find himself stuck when he tried to speak someone. He used to stammer when there is time to speak in front of people. He used to humiliate by other children. However, he learned from that, every single day did exercise in front of the mirror by talking himself like a crazy child. He faced his fair by giving a speech in public speaking club. Any of his efforts was valueless of course because every time he stepped out of his comfort zone he felt like a little scared rabbit but never stopped. In the end, the consequence of his long-time efforts and steps now lead him to the leadership. Now he studies at the University of Melbourne with a full scholarship, besides that, he is now leading a project named "Matsagtan Mongol". Now he is the inspiration of people. He is the role model of my life and the strongest proof that if we try hard things work for us.
Last but not least, I wish to say leadership skill is like a product that we buy by our labors and patience. Everyone can be a leader, it is not a skill that someone has it from natural!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as walked when they turn two years old. Every toddler can play, dance and sing. Did w...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re is time to speak in front of people. He used to humiliate by other children. Ho...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...skill that someone has it from natural!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5103626943 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49576542761 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572538860104 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9702568103 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5416666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29166666667 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150153321939 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432746234401 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466839478142 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928325964902 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216279078381 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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