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Independent Writing
Question 1
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Directions: You have 30 minutes to plan and write your response. Typically an effective response will be 300 words at least.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word count: 404
Today with a huge advancement in technology in all aspect of life. people demand on internet is increase. The question is, whether government should fund to im prove internet access or public transportation. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some people believe that improve public transportation is paramount facter to decrease traffic and environmental pollution. In my perspective, I concur with stetment that internet serveces have to support by government, especialy government has limited finance that not enable it to support both. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, internet is a crucial part in our life, this is mainly due to it's importance in education process. today, students can use internet to browes and get many information in all academic subjects. In addation, they can depend on internet to do their assignments and projects. this is a compelling example from my real life, when I was in high school, history teacher ask as to do project. I went to library to find resources to help me in the project. I could borrow only two book which are not enough to me to get a broad information. Therefore, I had to finish with those books, then, returned back before take another. But, today when my son need to do any project, he need a good internet and his device to get a lot of information. especially, his school give as free access to internet which is suported by government. as we can see the importance of funding to internet services.
Second, with the improvement of technology, internet can help people in many field which can save their time and money. For example, internet is important in medical field, anyone can use internet to browes and find a good medical center near to him. in this way, he can save time and get treatment as soon as possible. Also, people can buy any thing by using internet. Moreover, people can compare quality and prices of product to select perfect one. So this will help to save time and money.
In conclusion, the stetment is as persuasive as it stands. this is based on expositions which are mentioned above. funding internet access is more beneficial in education process. Furthermore, it will help person in saving time and money, because, it will facilitate their shopping or searching for good medical treatment.
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Independent Writing
Question 1
00:00
Directions: You have 30 minutes to plan and write your response. Typically an effective response will be 300 words at least.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word count: 404
Today with a huge advancement in technology in all aspect of life. people demand on internet is increase. The question is, whether government should fund to im prove internet access or public transportation. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some people believe that improve public transportation is paramount facter to decrease traffic and environmental pollution. In my perspective, I concur with stetment that internet serveces have to support by governmrnt, especialy government has limited finance that not enable it to support both. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, internet is a crucial part in our life, this is mainly due to it's importance in education process. today, students can use internet to browes and get many information in all academic subjects. In addation, they can depend on internet to do their assignments and projects. this is a compelling example from my real life, when I ws in high school, history teacher ask as to do project. I went to library to find resources to help me in the project. I could borrow only two book which are not enough to me to get a broad information. Therefore, I had to finish with those books, then, returned back before take another. But, today when my son need to do any project, he need a good internet and his device to get a lot of information. especialy, his school give as free access to internet which is suported by government. as we can see the imprtancr of funding to internet surveces.
Second, with the improvement of technology, internet can help people in many field which can save their time and money. For example, internet is important in medical field, anyone can use internet to browes and find a good medical center near to him. in this way, he can save time and get treatment as soon as possible. Also, people can buy any thing by using internet. Moreover, people can compare quility and prices of product to select perfect one. So this will help to save time and money.
In conclusion, the stetment is as persuasive as it stands. this is based on expositions which are mentioned above. funding internet access is more beneficial in education process. Furthermore, it will help person in saving time and money, because, it will facilitate their shopping or searching for good medical treatment.
Warning There are still some problems in the app. Will tackle them soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2414.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9670781893 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81122674593 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539094650206 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7302133058 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214729251001 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537153829924 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117457002755 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134113071065 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17160462223 0.0645574589148 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.