Some believe that one should spend more time being far awayfrom the people we care about, because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of relationship of people we care about, while others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationships with them.
Currently, there is a widespread belief that people should keep distance with people who they really care From my perspective,however,I totally agree with this statement.
First, people needs their own and personal place, which makes people to keep distance with someone who we care. Everyone has some private things and hobbies. Thus people usually trend to leave a personal place or period to think, to rest ot to reflect. Therefor, sometimes, people more likely to stay alone. It is annoyed, when someone always tries to find or to occupy this period or time. For instacne, the reason why many couples breaking up is one of this couple being to sticky. The man or woman in the couple always try to occupy other one’s all time, because he or she love other one so much. However, this behavior invades other one’s private area, which causes other one feel very uncomfortable, and then, this relationship is over. Thus the distancec between two intimate people is also essential.
Second, people needs some personal time to calmly think. It is very happy to accompany with people who we really care. But People are hard to care about what they say and what they do, when they are in a vey happy and exerciting atmoshpere. Sometime people say or do some thing making others annoyed or unconfortable. It is very difficult to realize when people in a very happy. Thus people needs sometime personal time or place to reflect, which needs sometimes people have being away with others. Being in a lonely environemnt always is a good way to calm down and to reflect. For me, I likely to stay a alone, sometimes. Even though it is very lonely, I am able to remember some things or sentencs which may offend people who I really care. Therefor, I believe people should be away from people cared by them.
On balance, It is not everyone liking be accompancy long time. People need some personal are and time to oneself. Thus, I claim that people should keep distance whith other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...who they really care From my perspective,however,I totally agree with this statement. ...
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Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
... one's all time, because he or she love other one so much. However, this behavi...
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Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e, and then, this relationship is over. Thus the distancec between two intimate peop...
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Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...g atmoshpere. Sometime people say or do some thing making others annoyed or unconfortable....
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Line 9, column 605, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd to reflect. For me, I likely to stay a alone, sometimes. Even though it is ver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8221574344 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53511576809 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521865889213 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6954558199 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9130434783 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9130434783 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40493792878 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124475971983 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793710245362 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251780759927 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735633677403 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.