In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is good rule or a bad rule?
Nowadays people all around the world have access to cigarettes widely, some of them usually smoke but others don't. Experts in many fields explained about harmfull impacts of smoking for any individual, however, an addicted person to Nicotine continue to use Cigaret to have a better feeling. Consequently, Governments revealed a law to reduce usage of this matter by stopping use of that in public spaces. Needless to say, some people do not agree with these kind of rules but I believe it is a vital aspect of any society to take care of the health of it's members. In the following essay I will bring reason to support my opinion.
First and foremost, smoking in a shared room not only has bad effect on the smoker but also has disadvantages for anybody else who is presence in that erea. Furthermore, recent researches demonstrated the influences of smoke for a second-smoker individual who facet with health related issues after a long period. my personal experince is a compelling examole of this, my father who was an athlete and in shape person get sick due to living for a long to a same place with his brother who is a smoker. Thus, after a while he wasn't able to breath as well as before, then he left the place. As a result, he got into trouble for reminded time of his life and started using pills to have a better situation.
Secondly, cigarettes has an awful smell that makes some to feel inconvenient sense. Infact, to respect others' feelings and concers we have restrict ourself, In this case the problem is the smoke. For Instance, I have a friend who smokes more than a box of cigarettes per day, I can't feel fresh in his flat! Moreover, the worse part is the times that he comes to visit me, I feel unsuitable because the smell of everything in my house. Therefore, I can invite him to my home rarely and this effects on our relationship.
To sum up, in my view smoking in shared regions is not a respectful manner to do because of the hamrs it has to other people and because of the smell every smoker makes around himself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., some of them usually smoke but others dont. Experts in many fields explained about...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...s to say, some people do not agree with these kind of rules but I believe it is a vital as...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of smoke for a second-smoker individual who facet with health related issues aft...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...lth related issues after a long period. my personal experince is a compelling exam...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...who is a smoker. Thus, after a while he wasnt able to breath as well as before, then ...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'restricted'.
Suggestion: restricted
...ect others feelings and concers we have restrict ourself, In this case the problem is th...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ore than a box of cigarettes per day, I cant feel fresh in his flat! Moreover, the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53783783784 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58709501723 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2912488968 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.45110844103 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150470445091 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047773633536 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347042890185 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891201654992 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448609226738 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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