In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be solved?
First of all,people cannot find enough time to do social activities in the global world.humanity and our world has been undergoing a transformation for centuries. In this transformation, people take more and more responsibility.as a result of this, the time that people allow to themselves in daily life decreases.For example,In 1850, a worker went to work 40 hours a week, but today it is 65 hours.The example clearly show that people are increasingly busy and have no time for art.
With the help of states it is possible to reintroduce art into people's lives.governments can reduce work hours and they can space in the people's life.Moreover,people support to produce and participate in art activities.In this way, people will be more involved in art and after a while they will be more productive in business life.For example, japan state reduced working days 6 to 4 and they organized art festivals in free day.after 2 years in this practice,it's been observed that people are more happy and productive.As a result,With the support of the state, people should take time for art in their lives.
In conclusion,interest in art has decreased due to the fact that people are very busy in their daily lives, but the interest in art can be increased again by scouring space for art in people's lives.I believe that in the near future the interest in art and artist will be at a much better level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99578059072 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2794881944 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.1344086022 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.90450726 48.9658058833 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.0 100.406767564 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 20.6045352989 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 5.45110844103 413% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270437471792 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160717133705 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672006384784 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193345777439 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280178863489 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 11.7677419355 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 58.1214874552 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.0537634409 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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