Some believe that tourist destination benefit for tourism.While others believee such countries negativly efected.Discuss both these views and give your opinion
There is an ever increasing that people who go to other countries as tourists.Therefore, some people claim that tourists are important for the country and others believe that tourists are not good for our nation.In this essay ı agree that arrival of the tourists to country is beneficial for all of us.this essay will discuss both points of view.
First off all,tourist contribute to economy with huge amount of foreign currency.this is because,tourist coming in country spend money to eat, stay and shopping. In this way, people who living in tourist destination do not face to unemployment and economic problems.In addition to this , they contribute to the economy by paying high taxes to the state because they earn lots of money from tourists.therefore, ıt is agree that tourist are good for economy because of their spending money. For example, 5 years ago, Greece faced huge economic crises and they started tourist campaing.Today, they paid %50 of their debt with money which came from tourist.Therefore,it is obvious that tourism is a great economic opportunity.
Those oppose to this say that,tourist cause cultural degradation.that is to say, they think that tourist who coming from foreign nations collapse local culture and local values such as wearing styles respect to nature religious views etc..however,people from coming another culture could become a chance.Because this situation can make local people to world citizen.For example, people from turkey did not welcome LGBT organization but with increasing number of tourist, people changed their idea.Today, %60 people in turkey support LGBT.As a result, tourism is beneficial for a country in terms of bringing people together.
In conclusion,while some people believe to country arrival of foreigners to a country is a great asset since they will both help the country economic role and a large humanistic views to other people and in the future as government put more emphases on the development of tourism within the country the positive effect will be seen more then that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 937.175257732 185% => OK
No of words: 326.0 206.0 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32515337423 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18440999855 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 290.88556701 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 16.3608247423 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.678489223 44.8134815571 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.333333333 76.5299724578 378% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.3333333333 16.8248392259 323% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 4.34317383033 510% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 2.54639175258 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236958289741 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131727596795 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819430927577 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168635278195 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793829228142 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 8.37731958763 368% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 70.7449484536 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 7.45979381443 327% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 8.54432989691 276% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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