Travel diaries for current situation worldwide has expanded vigorously. In the following essay we are going to discuss some benefit and drawback of tourism.
We shall begin with, a positive impact, tours and travels market has hit huge hike in past 10-15 years resulting increase in tourist destinations. People are willing to explore The World, they choose going far to go different country or a continent, trying the different type of cuisine, clothing, language and many more things. When, it comes to tourist destinations there are some people who think of negative impact. They believe people visiting foreign countries destroy their culture and the nature. In spite of, public awareness towards saving ancient buildings and architecture, a few guides, do not speak about the proper guidelines to be followed during the visit to any tourist attraction. Later, complaining about the plastic waste, food waste, ripped or dirty clothes lying here and there on ground.
Equally, important increase in the tourist location has provided labors in variety of fields. Consequently, competition in market has jumped, immediately, tourist favor this time and get their booking done in cheep price and more discount. For instance, a tour company has a package of 30,000 for 2 nights in a 3 star property with half board meal excluding travel charge on the other side there is a different company offering the same with addition flights with some discount. Simultaneously, traveler gets attracted to the second option.
To sum up with, tourist destination can be saved only when the tourist visiting any destination follows their norms, respecting the place and environment they are in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to go'.
Suggestion: to go
...lling to explore The World, they choose going far to go different country or a contin...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lothing, language and many more things. When, it comes to tourist destinations there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, second, so, for instance, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27985074627 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72853568693 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5430226649 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161894942137 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552424784956 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489318222697 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1044915276 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292873368744 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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