Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
Technology and innovation lead this complex huge world under an umbrella term - "global village". Gone are the days, when people took months to travel, when telegrams and posts were only physical mode of communication; as now-a-days a person can travel around the globe in a month, where telephones, pagers and cell-phones made the communication process easy and utterly speedy. In such a scenario, I personally feel the children be given opportunity to have access to smart phones as with that they can maintain a pace with fast growing world.
First of all, we all know internet is a boon for the...
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