Some people are more content with the life in the big city, while others think that they will be more satisfied to live in the village (small towns) instead. What is your opinion about this prompt and your preference?
Imagine birds chirping on trees while rivers reflect back the sunlight that illuminates the surface of the water. Imagine lying down on the greenish, fresh meadows, bathing oneself in the sunshine. A large number of modern people have been growing tired of the hustle and bustle experienced in big cities, thereby retreating to small towns seeking for peace and quiet. Appealing as living in small villages may be, I certainly prefer to live in the big city for the ensuing conspicuous reasons.
To begin with, living in big cities is more time-saving. To be more specific, since facilities and amenities in big cities are more accessible, I could certainly spend less time finding services that I need. Take public transit. Currently, I am living in the capital of Taiwan, Taipei, where it is equipped with a well-planned and well-established metro system. Since I have to commute to my workplace every day, the enormous convenience afforded by the metro system is superb. It only takes me about fifteen minutes from my residence to my office. Another relevant example is that exotic restaurants are diffused near my apartment, so every day after work, I do not need to spend much time finding a diner where I can sit down and relish the cuisines. However, whenever I travel back to my hometown, a small village in Tainan composed of only about five hundred residents, everything suddenly becomes inconvenient and time-consuming. I usually have to drive for about an hour to get to the nearest restaurant. Besides, no metro system is available in my hometown and the buses there only run every three hours. Therefore, to a person who takes great value in saving time, I find living in big cities more spellbinding.
Furthermore, living in urban areas typically would have better educational resources since city governments or other authorities concerned would be more willing to invest sufficient funds into supporting educational systems. To illustrate, since school facilities, such as libraries, laboratories, or the employment of teaching faculties, can be obtained only via some monumental aids, it stands to reasons that big cities can create better and higher-quality learning environment. After graduating from high-school, I faced a dilemma: whether I should attend a local community college near my hometown or go to a better university in Taipei. Although most of my relatives and my parents encouraged to stay since in that way, I could stay closer to home, I still decided to move to Taipei. In retrospect, the decision was sound and well-made since National Taiwan University, the best university in Taiwan, was renowned for some top-notch research and prominent professors. There, I was able to do research projects with them, such as the genetical microbial disintegration research that I did with a professor in the biology department. This research project could not be completed without some fancy and latest lan equipment, which was certainly prohibitively expensive. Besides, National Taiwan University had many funds from the city government to support students to participate in exchange-student programs. For example, I was able to study at University of Tokyo for one year without having to pay for the tuition since my stay at University of Tokyo was fully covered by National Taiwan University and the Taipei City Government, something that I might not be able to do if I attended a local community college near my hometown, which lacks a significant amount of financial resources to invest in students.
Irrefutably, some dissidents may disavow my argument by claiming that modern people are afflicted too much pressure from living in suburbs. The accumulating pressure from work, school, and interpersonal relation has all together contributed to some unwanted consequences, such as higher rate of suicide, cancer-contraction, and other negative outcomes. However, have these people forgotten that similar issues might also crop up in small villages? That is, have these people not realized that job opportunities are limited in small villages and if people cannot find jobs and stay unemployed for too long, they may also feel dejected and depressed? Have these not been aware of the fact that nowadays, many land-development projects are done in rural areas, where lands are being developed and exploited to an extent that water and air have been severely polluted? These problem are no less severe in small towns. Have these people not considered that once residents in small villages are sick, medical resources might not be readily accessible and available? Therefore, I deeply believe that living in big cities would yield greater benefits than living in small villages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...adows, bathing oneself in the sunshine. A large number of modern people have been growing tired o...
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Line 7, column 866, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'These problems'?
Suggestion: This problem; These problems
...er and air have been severely polluted? These problem are no less severe in small towns. Have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 107.0 52.1666666667 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3967.0 1977.66487455 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 756.0 407.700716846 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24735449735 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.24361079503 4.48103885553 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97858780578 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 391.0 212.727598566 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517195767196 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1274.4 618.680645161 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9037571179 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.96875 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78125 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196694117225 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530120332558 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515335002139 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124796198584 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306886660523 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 216.0 86.8835125448 249% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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