During the past decades, human activity and the negative effect of that becomes an important issue all around the world. On the other hand, some people may oppose this idea. I believe that, global warming, pollutants and extinction of many animal and plant species are the negative results of the human activity.
As the technology is getting advanced each day, human use that to improve the quality of their life's. So, they used to cut the trees and start to construct properties for their own benefits. However, the consequences of their activities caused many problems for them that it needs a lot of time to take care of that. For instance, Forests and trees have a significant role to purify the air. But, destroying the forest, caused an increased in the air pollution and many people get sick of that. Many lung cancers are due to the presence of the chemical elements in the air that emitted from cars, which does not eliminate by the trees.
In addition, Human also makes the earth an unsuitable place for the animals too. Many animal species extinct on land and in the water, because of the human activities. Releasing factory wastes to the sea and using the lands for own purpose, caused many animals to not survive and tolerate the changes. Although, humans aware that plants, animals and marines are having a crucial role in their food cycle, but there is no attempt by them to save these valuable resources.
In conclusion, I think, we, as a human, who is able to think and make a decision make the only living planet a worst place to live. We are not only destroying our own life and our next generation, in a same way, we make the earth a harmful place for animals to live too.
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...ative results of the human activity. As the technology is getting advanced ea...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241982507289 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.134110787172 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102040816327 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0262390670554 0.046263068375 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0437317784257 0.0685040099705 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107871720117 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0204081632653 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41491544096 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0349854227405 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.134110787172 0.0887237588012 151% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00291545189504 0.0209618222197 14% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0116618075802 0.0139019557991 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1718.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 302.0 408.028673835 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68874172185 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301324503311 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221854304636 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139072847682 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0860927152318 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41491544096 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 61.3406330739 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5714285714 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.245531166 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 43.756859035 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.81428571429 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369392388631 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118906887883 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0726641960362 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.617254924882 0.497263757937 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127435878908 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163758191996 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478508219985 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.425951958864 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0862361019104 0.067059652881 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254447964664 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285788726462 0.0618886996521 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 85 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30