Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such conditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Between the majority of social class, people divide into two groups that have an opinion to improve their lives, and others believe say that we should obey the wrong situations. People can approve these two categories. However, the conditions are considered by experts, and they suggest the best way to tack with this problem. This essay attends to examine these two opinions and factor which exert a significant impact on people life.
In the first step, humanity often clearly holds on the view that lack of money can satisfy by finding new job opportunities. To explain more, the problems in the developing countries would have been growing by the economic situation if economic resources had been allocated correctly. These signals seem to be accepted as big situations for the entirety of society. Besides, people can adapt their life in this society under the considerable pressure of the problem. Nonetheless, the official elected by the people should be responsible for people to deal with the situation. In consequence, the problem can stay with people.
Additionally, some critics believe that there are many problems in human life which will be solved by good planning by experts. The way of explanation the humankind depends on logic and precise thinking. Furthermore, in many centuries, many challenges in human life have been enhanced easily in the correct way. For instance, the cultural problem which is defended as identical issues has been solved by investing a financial resource in this way. To address concerns, humanity is convinced logically that how the right decision should do the problem.
Finally, from my point of view, we should plan away to make a big decision about our problem. It is necessary to say that a good planner has known the challenge of life. Besides, analyzing the difficulty needs a comprehensive background knowledge of the problems, which can be attained by collaboration people in the context of the society. If this fact has been materialized, there is no problem with the path of people's life.
In conclusion, we have a variety of people who should be counted as an essential vision in the course of life. Some people stay in their opinion to accept the vital situation in life. However, many experts believe that the problems should solve completely by an excellent decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75076434801 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515294117647 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5099637786 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306979762043 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922357209071 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128130429687 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218857244411 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.276983273503 0.0645574589148 429% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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