Some people believe that money spent on space research benefits all of humanity. Other people take the opposite view and say that money spent on this type of research is wasted. Tell which point of view you are agree with and explain why, using specific details and reasons.
Many developed country are spending money and country's budget on space research. These researches employ for many reasons such as investigating other plants for finding out lives and also determining climate condition in the plants. For these reasons some people agrees for spending money in research. On the other hand some people are blaming. From my view point spending money for undeveloped countries which are poor is unimportant need. Since in the undeveloped countries, government must spend budge to the public health insurances as well as solving social and economy problems.
First and foremost human needs to have healthy life. And human during his life may feel sickness. For this reason, every person should have general health insurances since the cost of treatment might be expensive. For instance, have a look at the person who could not pay treatment expenses and their expenses might be paid. Hence, government must determine budge for this purposes.
Government must attempt to solve economy and social difficulty instead of researching space and other plants. Humans need to solve their basic and essential problems. For example, a person who cannot overcome to daily economic trouble, might thought that his needs for spacecraft is not essential and crucial to his regular life. Consequently, funds for the celestial research is completely irrelevant. This exactly have the same meaning as that family's mother purchases costly jewelry for his beauty instead of saving money for buying house.
To sum up, doing research in space and other plants are beneficial but not crucial to the undeveloped and poor countries whose their problems are beyond the space research problems so these countries must involve in improving daily difficulties. As a result in my point of view spending money for space research is wastage of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292834890966 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.13707165109 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11214953271 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373831775701 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280373831776 0.0685040099705 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121495327103 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0436137071651 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59134567812 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249221183801 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00623052959502 0.00188951952338 330% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716510903427 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342679127726 0.0209618222197 163% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01246105919 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1850.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 294.0 408.028673835 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2925170068 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394557823129 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295918367347 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207482993197 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59134567812 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527210884354 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 53.2526167567 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3333333333 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6306219253 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.944444444444 0.644075263715 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 45.925170068 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.26153846154 1.45489161554 155% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289466982356 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127143066569 0.103427244359 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0855920481352 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46124735264 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128954745317 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111374791434 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783536742335 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270537272705 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0692928474543 0.067059652881 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195260047629 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069243404688 0.0618886996521 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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