Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
people face new challenges everyday. we are all required to be decisive in order to succeed about a thing or a goal that we are planning to achieve. success differs and varies in any forms. we can get it from hardwork, determination and devotion. this essay is based on my opinion and my own perspectives.
In life, we are all challenged to learn new things everyday. life pushes us to become stronger and for me, one part of that is the ability to make great and good decisions for ourselves that would lead us to happiness and of course, success. we all tend to decide carefully because we are afraid of failing and disappointing ourselves. based on my own experiences, yes, in order to have the most amazing outcomes, we should really think and decide carefully. but, no matter how hard we try to think and think extensively, we cannot stop things from happening. No matter how careful you are from making decisions in life, if it is not fated to happen then it will not happen. we do not have and we cannot control destiny. All we can do is to accept things and move on.
In my opinion success can come from both thinking carefully and taking risks. For example, I am now taking the TOEFL exam because I really want to get verified for a scholarship. it is a risk and this scholarship is a really great chance for me. Why? because I do not have any idea as to what may happen after this and if I have ever passed the exam, it may lead me to things that I am extremely praying for. In my humble opinion, careful way of thinking can lead us to success but taking risks and chances could lead us to success more. it will open us to lots of opportunities and we all just need to be brave and try.
In my conclusion, people are all worried about what may happen if they do not decide and think about things properly. but for me, if you cannot think and you find yourself under a great pressure, do not hesitate to try and step the game up. The world is like battlefield where you always need to put your head high up and face it with all your might.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, then, as to, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31958762887 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44898529225 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476804123711 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.895708342 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158058470591 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535681937227 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073414624441 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100838257332 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444350198274 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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