Some people believes that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from?
Without any shadow of doubt, becoming successful in life is an important goal for everyone. Since people are totally different with each other, they choose various ways to achieve their goals. Some risktakers might take risky opportunities, others may avoid risks and choose a routine life. Personally, I prefer the idea that success results from a reasonable planning. There are numerous reasons, three of which are discussed hereunder.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that one can achieve his or her goal faster, if he or she has a obvious goal. I believe, we do not live long enough to waste our time on trial and error. Achieving a goal as soon as possible is one of my priorities anytime I set a goal for myself. In contrast, if a person take risks too much, there are a great possibility that he or she would not be able to achieve his or her goals. Consequntly, when that person look to the past, he or she will probably be regretful for the time he had wasted.
Secondly, when we plan everything clearly, we could allocate our time and energy more efficiently. I, personally, subscribe to the idea that taking risks might get a lot of energy from a person and would not have proper result at the end. For example, whe I was a high school student, I used to plan for my studying times. By doing this, I was able to manage my time better. In contrast, any time that I studied without any clear plan, my grades was awful.
Last, but not least, a person who have plans for his or her future usually can predict the future accurately and avoid quite a few possible dangers in the way of getting that goal. Moreover, considering the future helps us to maintain motivated to achieve our goals. In contrast, a person who take risks may become disappointed in the middle of his or her way due to the fact that there is not any clear future achievement for his or her attempts.
In sum, with all this taken into account, I subscribe to the idea that the life is not a lottery which we gamble on that. By planning reasonable goals, a person can gets his or her destiny faster, spend far less energy, and predict his or her future more precisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is or her goal faster, if he or she has a obvious goal. I believe, we do not live...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...planning reasonable goals, a person can gets his or her destiny faster, spend far le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49872773537 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48935603579 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513994910941 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0062861836 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107386105041 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402116643402 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734976821017 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070982485004 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941230444737 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.