some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. other believe that it is best to use that time doing thing together that is related to schoolwork
Nowadays, many parents are too busy in metropolitan cities and they do not have much time to spend with their children. It is really important to use this minimum time for doing effective works.to some extent, I subscribe to the idea that playing with children and spending fun time with them is the most practical and prosperous work.
To begin with, children usually show their interest and special behavior when they play a game so this characteristic helps parents to become aware of the mental and physical situation of their children. Effective training of children require to knowledge about them and without knowledge parents are not able to help to their children in different situations. For instance, my parents both were employees and they worked all days until night. However, in weekend they played with us in park and spoke a lot during this time. That was really helpful because they got more information about our problems or all the situation that annoyed us. Finally they usually suggest the best solutions for these problems. These plays compensate the time which we need to spend with our parents.
Second, the children need to have entertainment besides their educational time so playing with parents help them to release their stress that they faced with during a week. since they like their parents they will experience funny time when they play with them and it conducive to overcome their fear and stress because they believe that they parents always support them in different situation. For example, my little brother deal with a lot of stress during his exam time but he can overcome to that by playing and speaking with my parents. My parents always teach him that learning the concept of lessons is more important that acquiring good grades like the time that play and it is not important to win a game because feeling happiness is more important than winning. The supporting role of parents help children to overcome many of their fears.
however, some children have many problems related to their lessons in school that do not ask to their teachers because they feel fear or shy but they can ask they parents easily. Since they feel better relationship with their parents they can solve many of their problems by their parents ‘help.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned reason, playing with children is the best usage of the time since parents can get more information about the mental and physical situation of children. Furthermore, the supporting role of parents that children feel when they playing with parents help them to overcome to many problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...s or all the situation that annoyed us. Finally they usually suggest the best solutions...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ess that they faced with during a week. since they like their parents they will exper...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...d stress because they believe that they parents always support them in different situat...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ldren to overcome many of their fears. however, some children have many problems relat...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
... feel fear or shy but they can ask they parents easily. Since they feel better relation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01843317972 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51813275832 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423963133641 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8632241291 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34389572366 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132205141904 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809540465525 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234631679526 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905091613502 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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