Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin with two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping into conclusions. After all, each and every question requires careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to the truth. Even though some people may adamantly believe that the best way to spend time with our children is to do schoolwork and studying assignments, I firmly believe that such an opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, I think that parents should spend their time with kids having fun and playing different kinds of spots or games.
First and foremost, engaging with kids in fun activities will engender a myriad of advantages. As playing is an essential part of every child's development, this will help kids to benefit as much as they do from studying. Playing for children with the presence of their parents will amplify the playing usefulness. To illustrate this, When my eight years old son used to bike, he used to get bored quickly. On the other hand, When I joined him in biking, I rode my bike with him every time he went out. My son enjoyed riding his bike much more than before, as I encouraged him. I also taught him how to use his motorcycle efficiently, especially on bumpy surfaces, which was difficult to control his bike on. After a while, My son and I created the habit of going every morning for biking, which helped my son join the biking team in our city. I realized that my son got the ultimate goal of such a simple activity, just by joining him and sharing my experience as a parent. Therefore, biking turned out to be his biggest passion, and he achieved a high ranking in national races.
On top of this, Playing with kids in free time instead of studying will strengthen the bond between kids and parents. As sharing fun activities will alleviate any tension or disagreement between the kids and their families. Family games always embrace the relationships within the household members, thus they obtain memories that accompany them for the rest of their lives. For example, I used to have major disagreement with my father, as he used to criticize my school performance. He used to help me with school homework, but I did not his way of teaching me. He used to shout at me and saying I am not smart enough to absorb the information. I used to hate his aid in studying assignment and tried to avoid him by every possible way. My mother noticed the descending curve of my link with my father; hence, she did her best to correct this relation defect. She bought a lot of family games that requires family to divide into teams. Then, she assigned me with my father to be in the same team.initially, I get intimidated by my father as I know his attitude towards me, But I was surprised how he was a great team leader. I discovered a great side in my father that I did not explore before, he was smart, compassionate, and persistent to win the game , while giving credit to his team members. After a while,I started to create a good bond with my father. Knowing the fact that he is not a great teacher, but still he was a great leader and father.
In conclusion, yes, it is virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out on this given essay. Still, I believe that the best useful way for parents to spend time with kids is to join and share fun activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, after all, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2811.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 613.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58564437194 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61467210214 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499184339315 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 876.6 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.51792114695 370% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9751657926 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256247294564 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683668881693 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848192389637 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189404872123 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784796439636 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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