Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
here is a big debate regarding the advantages and drawbacks of Internet database. Some people believe that the internet is a valuable source for information,while others think the huge amount of data are overwhelming. I strongly agree on the value of the internet based information.As as result of, its high content's variety and updates, besides it is highly accessible and convenient. Many tools can be used to eliminate the overwhelming problem of the internet information.
First, The content on the internet is unlimited. The web contains all kinds of materials that is sufficient to answer any question. It is hard to find this anywhere else. Also, the website always updated and corrected for mistakes easier than the printed materials that may stay with wrong content for decades. For example, When I have an assignment in my college. I use the internet which served my needs efficiently. I could find enough data to cover all aspects in my research. Needless to buy any books which are costly. The result is always up to date and accurate.
Secondly, The internet is highly accessible anywhere and anytime. We can use our smartphones or our laptop 24 hours seven day a week.
The internet based information. We can narrow the search according to the needed topic. For example, Last year, I was preparing for my final exam. I needed to search on a very specific topic. When I used printed materials from the library,I felt lost. Then I went to the Internet and narrowed my search to specific words. The result came concise and on topic. I managed to finish my study rapidly.
Finally, The internet information can be overwhelming to some people. But if we know exactly what we need, we will not get confused. We should search on trusted website. Especially, when it come to scientific research. We can not use public website or forum to search for accurate data. For example, two months ago, my son, got allergy all over his body. I had to search online what caused him this reaction, and how can I handle it. I went to Mayo clinic website. I found very scientific answers to my questions. Besides, I found a systematic way for dealing with this kind of reactions.
In conclusion, I believe that the internet database is a valuable and reliable source of information.Although This information may be too much to handle, it still effective and serve its role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87901234568 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88771106094 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.822495757 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1176470588 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9117647059 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.91176470588 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 22.0 4.88709677419 450% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162019179995 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368687420686 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435984442928 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857103822178 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403589876782 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.