Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are the roles that accompany the children for a long time. They are expected to educate the children by doing things together. However, when there is limited amount of time, parents cannot do all the things with their children together. They have to carefully decide how to use the time. Personally, I believe that the best way to use the limited time is to have fun playing games or sports with their children.
To begin with, playing games or sports with the children allow the family to have a deeper bond. Through the interact in the event such as playing basketball, family and children can become more familiar to each other. For instance, when playing board games together, children could feel comfortable to tell parents their school experience. If they encounter some difficulties, such as being bullied by other children, the parents can discover this at the first time. Being protected by the parents, children would believe the parents more. The relationship of the family therefore becomes stronger.
In addition, playing sports or games can train the children mentally. Children can have a stronger mind and more courage to face the adversities. For instance, when playing basketball together, children could always be the one who lose the game. However, it is a favorable chance for parents to teach the children. Even if people know they are not likely to win the game, they should always try their best and struggle to the last moment. If the children can learn the spirit and win the game sometime, they can gain confidence. No matter what challenges the children will face in the future, they have already got the correct attitude, and they can definitely overcome the problems.
Admittedly, some people may argue that parents should use the time doing things together that are related to the schoolwork, since it is always the highest priority for children to have an ideal academic performance. However, this could jeopardize the relationship between parents and children, because children would think that parents always force them to do what they do not like. Besides, parents are busy at their work and they could be really tired. Doing schoolwork could be a further burden for parents. Being expected to rightly and perfectly teach the children, parents need to extremely concentrate in the schoolwork so that the children will not misunderstand. This makes parents even more exhausted. No one can live without rest, and parents also require some rest. By playing games or sports together, both parents and children can relax and own a happy memory.
To sum up, I believe the best choice for parents to use the time is to have fun playing the games or sports. Both children and parents can enjoy the events and get relaxed. They can better connect to each other.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98720682303 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49731967919 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441364605544 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3245327084 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6551724138 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1724137931 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.24137931034 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435006554794 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132000039573 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120589929034 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307294321684 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130635989683 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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