Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
Throughout history, food has played a prominent role in all societies. Due to it is paramount importance, researchers have always searched for ways to enhance the health of food. A controversial question which is often raised this idea is that whether individuals prefer to prepare meals in their homes or tend to buy food from the restaurant. I personally contend that the best ways for prepare and eat food is that people cook food at their home. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite factor to be mentioned is that cook food at home has many advantages points such as improving relationships between families members. To elaborate on my point, as we know, because of a hectic lifestyle people do not spend adequate time with their family members. So, since mother wants to cook food, other family members try to help their mother. In this situation, parents and their kids start to talk to each other and their opinion. Therefore, this family can make a strong bond with each other, and become more successful and happy persons. A significant example that strikes in my mind about my own experience. When my mother wants to cook food, I and my brothers try to help her. Also, we talked to each other about our aim and problems. I think this is a better time than me and my family can put to getter and provoke relationship between each other.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that proper food and male at home makes the food healthier than food which buys at restaurants. To shed more light on this matter, when people want to cook the food at their home, they most time try to use organic materials and fresh vegetables. Hence, these meals have high quality and nutrition which people especially children to grow. As matter of fact, in the past, mothers had the duty that cooked food for each male. So, people did not tend to buy food from a restaurant and fast food; therefore, they were healthier than people who live in this age. It is worth mentioning, inasmuch as ones make male at home, they can save their money. When people buy some fresh materials for cook food, they can spend less money than buy food from restaurants.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that proper males at dweller have many beneficial points. I believe that families who cooking food at home not only can improve the relationship between each other but also can make healthier food.
- TOEFL TPO 47 - Integrated Writing Task 81
- TPO 40 73
- TOEFL TPO 45 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TOEFL T P O 42 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why? 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, well, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7632183908 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5031242204 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1877552512 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0869565217 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238473720755 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07417388657 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592618559027 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147727205085 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409536817946 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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