Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
Today is almost axiomatic that food is vital need of human. Eating food becomes an indispensable part of anyone’s lives. Nowadays people are interested not only what they eat but also where they eat. Some people prefer to buy and eat their meals at restaurants whereas some others take an opposite view point and preparing and eating food at home. I despite the prevailing view, contend that both ways have merits and demerits, but I would rather eat at home. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first salient aspect to be introduced is that preparing and eating food at home is cheaper. Without doubt economic issue is the most important aspect of any debate. Eating at restaurants imposed a plenty of cost to anyone, for driving, parking, service ones is received and so on. Some people prefer to prepare food at home and save this money for other purposes. Take a personal experience as an example, one of my friends liked film and book very much; most of the time she cooks at home and spends the extra money on buying film and book.
Another equally significant point is that food has played a prominent role in our body health. Due to keep healthy, most of the people suggest that try to prepare food at home. Undoubtedly, if ones cook by self, he will aware of ingredients and ways uses to prepare this food. Most restaurants seeking to more profit; so they try to use ingredients that not only are fresh but also are harmful for people’s health. Recent television show underscore the fact most restaurants even though which are really expensive and luxury had used burned oil for cooking, their kitchen was really dirty. After I saw this interview, I think that never prefer to eat out.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that today in order to complex and busy life, people have no time to communicate with each other, may be lunch or dinner time is the best time for family member to gather, and talk about different aspect of any members life, their problems and even sometimes their lovely television’s show, telling joke and have fun time. A recent study says that one of the main cause of prevailing psychological problems among youth regarding to distance between family’s members. Had they spent most time with each other, they would have prevented most of these difficulties.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that eating it’s an indispensible part of anyone’s life; either at home or at restaurants it’s more important they feel comfortable. Eating has become part of counties’ culture. Consequently, it is highly suggested that authorities put more emphasize on cultivating healthy ingredients, and enrolled strict rule for places associated with food.
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- Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why? 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, really, regarding, so, whereas, even so, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00646551724 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80735425688 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5059295379 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1739130435 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278511896978 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822765206646 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959280943646 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161826373946 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899542924901 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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